Candidate outreach message templates
Email scripts for recruiters
For anyone who sells to recruitment firms and wants recruiters on their list.
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Candidate feedback you can copy
How to use this swipe file
Give this to new clients in your onboarding pack or send it before the first interviews. Hiring managers who know what to say protect the employer's name.
What is inside
After an application
After a first callBe clear about what you decided and why.
After an interviewName a real strength. It must be true.
When a candidate withdraws
When an offer is turned downAsk once.
Three title ideas for your own version
Candidate feedback you can copy
What to say when you turn a candidate down
Rejection wording that candidates remember kindly
Where to promote it
Your client onboarding packLinkedIn posts for hiring managersthe first reply to a new clienta link in your hiring checklist
Why give employers wording for candidate feedback?
Candidates who hear nothing, or something clumsy, tell others. Wording that is kind and clear protects the employer and keeps good people interested.
Make this swipe file your own
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